i don't know - through paving cracks is the kind of syntax i like
It may be all you had time for, but it shows up my efforts. I am becoming a real fan. Well done.
thanks swiss and dave, I don't think they show up your efforts at all.
All these are nice. I like the third best. Or, at least, it seems to me the most Japanese of the bunch -- looking from one thing to the other, with the "haiku moment" of a sudden in between....
thanks James, you know more about the form than me!
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i don't know - through paving cracks is the kind of syntax i like
It may be all you had time for, but it shows up my efforts. I am becoming a real fan. Well done.
thanks swiss and dave, I don't think they show up your efforts at all.
All these are nice. I like the third best. Or, at least, it seems to me the most Japanese of the bunch -- looking from one thing to the other, with the "haiku moment" of a sudden in between....
thanks James, you know more about the form than me!
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